Friday, May 14, 2010

Film Analysis

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Ordinary World. Mr. Fredricksen lives a lonely life in a little house he and is dead wife.
Call to adventure: When the little boy Russell wants to get it helping the elderly badge and asks Mr. Fredricksen to help
Refusal to call: when Mr. Fredricksen wont listen to Russell
Meeting with the Mentor: the house he made with his wife is his mentor through the whole movie.
Crossing the Threshold: when Mr. Fredricksen takes his house up to the sky
Tests: storms, dogs, birds, nature.
Ordeal: when he goes to save Russell
Reward: a friend and self gradification.
The road back, when he lets his house go
Resurrection: when he fights the dogs and bad guy and almost dies
Return with Elixir: The dog and Russell.

Monday, April 26, 2010

Hero

Name: Damon
Age: 20
Race/religion/gender: White Guy
Parents: Dead
Style of dress: very rich. always collared shirts, colors match.
Hometown: Salem
Marital status/family: One older brother, and younger sister. no communication for years.
Most embarrassing moment: too cool for embarrassment.
Greatest fear: losing his sister, Death
Strongest desire: to stop always having to run.
Job: works at random jobs all over the world
Where he/she wants to be in 5 years: Married, settled down.
Guiltiest pleasure: Killed a guy, but made lots of money from it.
Identifying marks: few scars on arms and hands.
Mannerisms/gestures: very respectful, mature.
What he/she was like in school: The "popular guy" everyones idol
Favorite sayings: everything good, is worth waiting for.
Favorite quotes from songs: "when you laugh, laugh out loud cause it will carry all your cares away. "
Favorite movie quotes: "You are a baby" - avatar
Most valuable possession: ring from is mother
How he/she feels about love: feels like it doesnt exist. people just trick their minds into falling in love.
Philosophy on life: nothing is over unless i say it is.

Sunday, April 11, 2010

Adaptation

Growing up Jim’s brother always said that he was rotten to the core, but he was the baby of the family and got by with more. His mom would always save him cause he was her baby. But time never stands still and soon Jim was moving out of the house. Moving from place to place. Turning twenty-one is Cincinnati; Jim called home and said “Your boy is now a Man.”

And she replied “I don’t care if your 80, you’ll always be my baby” Jim smiled, he was a mommas boy. But one day Jim received a call that would change his life forever. He knew his mother was sick, but not deathly sick. The phone call he got said that his mother was dying and that she needed to see her baby.

Jim immediately got in the car and started driving home to Alabama. He knew that he didn’t have much time and surpassed the speed limit by far. Memories flooded through his mind, already missing his mom. The weather seemed to match his emotions and his tears synced with the rain outside. He wanted his mom to see her baby.

When he arrived he thought that she was sleeping. But all the tears running down the faces of his family told a different story. Jim’s heart shattered as he realized that he arrived too late. Jim never got to say goodbye.

“And he cried, just like a baby. “

Friday, March 26, 2010

Blurbs

Cats in the Cradle(Harry Chapin)
little boy wants to grow up and be just like his daddy. but whenever the little boy wants to be with his dad, his dad keeps putting him off. As time continues, the little boy grows up to be a dad of his own. and acts just like his dad to his little boy. The dad notices this and wants to reverse things and spend time with his boy. but now is son, being a father is too busy and keeps putting him off. everyone grows up to be like their father but, its not a good father.

There Goes My Life(Kenny Chesney)
Dan never wanted the responsibility of having a kid around nagging him. He was just having fun one night and didnt realize what could happen. he begged and pleaded with her to give up the child, abortion, anything. he just didnt want to be involved in the childs life. but that all changes when he holds his little girl in his arms for the first time. and time flies and now his little girl is off to collage, and now he realizes that she was everything to him. and he didnt know what he would do without her in his life.

Just To See You Smile(Tim McGraw)
two lovers- girl moves to tenn. for a job, and boy moves with her to be with her. the boy has to leave for a while and while he is away she falls in love with another guy. he returns expecting open arms and kisses. but when she tells him that she no longer loves the guy who moved away from home for her, and that she is in love with another guy, he is surprised. but all he says is that he is happy for her, but really his heart is broken.

The Baby(Shelton Blake)
through snow, ice, and rain, Jimmy is driving as fast as he can to make it home. the other day he got a phone call about his mother on her way to death. he is the baby of the family and a mommas boy. as he drives memories flash through him and his tears match the pouring rain. but even though his speed far passes the speed limit sign, he still arrives too late.




Sunday, March 21, 2010

Story Song

Title: The Baby
Artist: Shelton Blake
song lyrics... Click here

Plot: This is a story of a man who is the baby of the family, who finds out that his mother is severely ill, and will probably not make it through the night. He's out of town, but he rushes home to be by her side, only to arrive too late.

Characters:
Baby of the family (speaker)
siblings (family)
Mom

Conflict:
"The baby" of the family doesnt live at home, and gets a call saying that his mother is dying and that he needs to come home. His family tells him that is mother needs to see him. He drives all the way home, speeding the whole entire time. But even then, he still arrives too late. He never gets to say goodbye.

Setting:
At first it shows that he moves around all the time. It shows that he never stays in one place for a long while. It says "I got a call in Alabama, said come on home to Louisiana" cause thats is where his mom is at.

Sunday, March 14, 2010

6 word Memoirs

1: Hi there, my name is doug.
2: Seduced by Adventure; Rescued by luck.
3: Sold my Toyota. Bought a Ford
4: Doctor said gonna die. i didnt.
5: Everyone deserves to learn something new.
6: Older brother, he teased, i tattled.
7: liver cancer diagnosis, doctors make mistakes.
8: not dead so still pay taxes
9: Dont say cant, unless you try
10: go for it or wonder forever

Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Grand Theft Poetry

We real cool
Then the years Pile up
Then i teach my heart to speak
And i couldnt tell
That sometimes i cry
its why we sing
so wake me when im free
wishing i only had my camera
somewhere there is a poem about
sticky children in grocery lines
and that has made all the difference
im as weak as a kitten
and thats the insanity of war

Thursday, February 25, 2010

very Bad Poetry: second draft

have you ever noticed that when the winds blows by and tickles your neck, that it can actually

whispers secrets too?

secrets that open your eyes to the world.

not the people in the world, or the cars, or all those worldly things.

but the nature of the world.

its easy to live your life not noticeing

that the tree in your backyard is growing with you.

its easy to watch your best friend- partner in crime

dog to live its very first day and its last.

its easy to take the life of a fish to satisfy your life.

but whats hard is watching

your own life

as a person

live and die.



Sunday, February 21, 2010

Very Bad Poetry

flowers live and die
trees live and die
birds live and sing and die
bees live and sting and die
cats live, then live, then live, then live, then live, then live, then live, then live, then live, and die.
animals live and die
fish live and die
then they get fried
oh why do they have to die?
plants live and die
and people live and die.

Friday, February 12, 2010

Impulse

M- Did we miss the train? it seems so empty here.
W- No the train shouldnt be here for ten more mintues
M- oh thats good, wouldnt want to miss the train and get stuck here.
W- yeah.
M- well your a little pretty thing, arent you?
W- oh haha.. thanks.
M- im sorry that probably sounded pretty creepy.
W- no its ok.
M- im sure you get told that a lot.
W- haha
M- well what are you doing here all alone?
W- i just got back from work and now im waiting for the train.
M- what do you do for work?
W- i own some banks
M- so thats what your doing now days.
W- what?
M- nothing.. you were always good with money its no wonder you ended up working at a bank.
W- excuse me?
M- you dont remember me do you?
W- remember who?
M- ME! how can you not remember me?
W- wha.. what?
M- remember in high school, when i approched you, prepared to spill all my emotions for YOU, and you turned me away?
W- no.... well i turned many guys away haha
M- i loved you! i even collected your hair!
W- my hair? ok sorry i dont remember you, im just going to go now...
M- ill keep following you, i always have been following you, and dont you worry, it will continue!

Thursday, January 28, 2010

Four Fire Alarm

Walt is a middle aged man, living the life of a "retired fireman." But he really wasnt "retired" he got fired from saving the lives of the people of his community. it was never his intention to get fired, he loved his job. but that was before he made the big mistake of not obeying orders. Thats where he finds himself staring at a painting in this museum. And all the memories come flooding back to him. he pictures himself in the firefighter suit, he once knew to well. He liked this painting because it was something he never saw. the whole picture of the fire taking over. He was always in the fire saving lives, never outside just watching.... and thats what he did with this picture, he stood staring and just watching....

Friday, January 15, 2010

Introduction

My name is Caroline Carmichel, my mother always said that i was named after Michelangel. But i think she just made that up to made me feel like im worth something. I lived in Italy and Grecce for the first thirteen years of my life. Now i find myself after the long 25 years of my life, stranded in the depths of Ohio. I like to read, i read all different types of books. And since i read i feel i must write. Although writing is not my forte, i do it best as i can.